Let's see, where do I begin? I Suppose I should start with just how stylized this looks. Your own style is entirely evident throughout the whole piece. The sleek thin black lines really pull the colors in together and define the character's form, I enjoy the way you did the hair especially. However, on some parts it seems you completely forgo this style, mainly, the lips and the tail.

Overall shape of the character is nice and feels like it's flowing, except for a few minor flaws such as the fingers on her right hand and how they are angled. Another problem I see is with the shortness of her forearm on the left arm. Although the torso is long, It works with the rest of the figure.

The shading is nice and the character is definitely original, you could have done something more with the background to spice it up but its fine how it is, since that really isn't the focus. In the end, it seems some areas are less defined as others, yet it all pulls together nicely.