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Practicing and gettin' used to this big assed Cintiq. All freehandin Photoshop/SAI. No cell shading for once!

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:iconmdinnerparty723:
This is a very interesting character design. I like the idea behind the suit and the pose is pulled off as menacing. The extremely spiked heel is also very intriguing. Anatomy wise it also looks good and I love her figure.

Looking at the suit, however, I'm going to assume the your intention was to give it a latex appearance, especially because of the way it stretches over the foot. The problem with that is that the suit is not reflective enough to have an appearance of latex. More highlights, in the right spots of course, would have strengthened the appearance and texture of latex.

Also, because of the background is so dark and she isn't leveled with the ground, she looks like she's floating in mid air. However, a shadow indicating her position on the ground would have been much better. And because the feet aren't properly leveled to the ground it looks like the character is leaning slightly to right and it makes it look like you drew it that way. The spike feel should have been longer to reach the toes. The left foot is also a bit crooked and I think is the main thing behind the balance.

Nevertheless, its a good picture and just have some minor issues that needed to be looked at once again. Good job;)
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YAY ITS MY WIFE!!!!! I have to admit my favorite of your arts are always the Quoth'it :) I've been looking forward to seeing this one forever.
:iconladamedepique:
Just awsome.
Background is a little bit too dark I think.
Appart from that, have I already mentioned that I love your drawing style ?

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Yeah, I should lighten it up. I keep forgetting that I'm in the dark while drawing and other folks arent. But danke! :iconblushingplz:

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I will do many more Quoffits from now on!

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:iconvexbeast:
Nice hips. You've got some good anatomy skills going there. :3

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Thank you! I was just worried about my anatomy earlier. XD

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Really? It's a bit exaggerated in the parts that are usually left purposefully under-exaggerated for the sake of what the artist thinks people want women to look like. Well... not really exaggerated so much as -correct-. But even so, it's hardly noticeable. That said, I find the realistic look refreshing. I like to see beauty depicted as what it is.

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Oh my! :blush: Very glad you think so!

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